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May 2005 Spotlight Article

Are You a Fog-Walker?
by Mary J. Forbes

I’m always amazed when I talk to other writers and discover how many are what I call "fog-walkers."I’m one myself. I don’t plot; I don’t outline or jot notes. I don’t have dozens of sticky notes, index cards, time-lines, character charts or plot grids.

Nada.

What I do have is a "germ," a tiny idea. It can be about a character, theme, setting or event. It can be nothing more than the headline in a newspaper or a 10-second sound-byte on TV. It can be one word I’ve read in some book.

In other words, the germ is microscopic. Sometimes it stays that way for years. Other times, it evolves within hours, days, weeks. However, once the germ has been prowling around in my head like a lone wolf staking territory, and I feel confident enough to put some tangibility to it, I begin my story.

I type Chapter One across the top of the screen.

I type the first sentence. Then the next. And the next....

Usually, my germ carries me through that first chapter. If I’m lucky, I’ll fog walk through the first three chapters.

Fog walking is more commonly called "flying into the mist." Personally, I like the term fog walking—since I've often walked through those clouds that fall from the sky to sit on the earth after a rain. On a few occasions, the fog is so thick you can't see more than twenty feet into the distance. Of course, walking in a familiar neighborhood is easy. You recognize the path under your shoes. You know where your journey ends.

Not so if you’re a writer who fog-walks through her story.

I do not know what my next scene will be. I don’t know what the next page or paragraph or sentence will contain. I simply write. Yes, I have an inkling of what I want to write about at the time, but I cannot determine how my scene will end, how my characters will react, what they will say. And I certainly can’t depict the conclusion of the book!

Do I love fog-walking? Oh, yeah.

I love the mystery. The awe of seeing characters take shape, evolve, say things that have me staring stunned at the screen, thinking: Where on earth did that come from? And I especially delight in those moments when I type a sentence and recognize how it ties to a previous scene, or offers a clue to a future one.

So how do I get to that eventual ending of a book? How do I..."plot"?

There are a number of ways, but my favorite is brainstorming with a writing friend who is also a fogwalker. Not only do you get to share a little writing and biz chitchat over coffee for a couple hours, but you’ll always come away excited and keenly motivated.

So what if the she writes in a different genre? So what if some of those brainstorming ideas are a tad off the wall?

Write them down anyway, take them home, read them, think about them—and feel inspired to mold and reshape those kernels, even let them lead you into an entirely different facet of your story.

Come away with a couple words or a phrase, and the session will be worth the time you’ve spent. Those words/phrase—that one idea—could unlock a door you hadn’t considered. A door to which a field of ideas rolls straight to the horizon.

I’ve been a writing fog-walker all my life. Oh, yes, I’ve taken plotting courses, read oodles of how-to-plot books and sat in plotting workshops, ad nauseam. Until I’ve literally had knots in my stomach and tears in my eyes, wondering: how can I be a writer if I don’t know how to plot?

Well, Nike said it best: I just "Do It." One word at a time.

So take a breath. Relax. Being a fog-walker does not mean you can’t write fabulously compelling books. What it does mean is that you love the mystery of the unknown. It means you love having your characters, your story direct you.

Most of all, it means your method of creating your story is as perfect as any other on the planet.

Mary J. Forbes pens emotional and character-driven stories for Silhouette Special Edition. Everything She’s Ever Wanted, her next release, will be in stores in August 2005. Mary is a member of the RWA® Greater Vancouver Chapter.

Articles may be reprinted in RWA® chapter newsletters, attributed to the Spotlight. Non-RWA® newsletters may not reprint articles without the permission of the authors.

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